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Comment by anthony whyte on July 6, 2011 at 10:40am

A precept to keep in mind when you set the scene in your own book is to color your description with emotion.

Comment by Free Spirit Unique on February 27, 2010 at 7:31am

D.O.B.1963
"X-Panthers"
on
park benches
in '73,
"wasted no time"
talk-n 2 me
-free spirit unique

Comment by anthony whyte on February 17, 2010 at 12:58pm

MAKE SURE YOUR DIALOGUE MATTERS...DRAMATIZE, DRAMATIZE, DRAMATIZE...

Comment by anthony whyte on February 17, 2010 at 12:54pm

WHAT'S BETTER THAN WRITING LIKE ANYONE ELSE...? WRITING LIKE YOURSELF. STOP BEATING AROUND THE BUSH AND FIND YOUR VOICE

Comment by anthony whyte on February 17, 2010 at 12:53pm

ALWAYS GO OVER YOUR SCENES YOU HAVE WRITTEN WITH AN EYE FOR INTENSITY LEVEL IF IT ISN'T STRONG ENOUGH TRY TO RATCHET IT UP...

Comment by anthony whyte on February 17, 2010 at 12:51pm

MAKE EACH SCENE EXCITING BY FOCUSING ON THE HIP... HOOK, INTENSITY, PROMPT OF YOUR STORY...

Comment by anthony whyte on February 17, 2010 at 12:27pm

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Comment by Michael j Lewis on February 1, 2010 at 7:25am

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1. The Universe (Astrophysics theory)
2. The Origin of Nature (Astrophysics/physics theory)
3. The Prime Life Creation Process (Law of nature theory)
4. The Super Code of Universe (Astrophysics theory)
5. The Universe Super Code Mathematics (Astronomical Mathematics theory)
6. The Universe Gravity (Astrophysics/ Physics theory)
7. The Sun (Astrophysics theory)
8. The Planets (Astrophysics theory) …etc


Investment Projects:

1. Book Publishing: Astrophysics, Mathematics, humanity, and physics …etc
2. Computer Games: based on scientific discovery of the physical Universe
3. Varity of life new sport: based on scientific universe objects motion theory
4. Documentary movies: based on 26 years research true story
5. Future movies: based on scientific research
6. Television serious: based on Astrophysics research
7. Spaceship design projects: based on Astrophysics research scientific theory
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• Table games
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• Internet games

Best regards,

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I have something for you.
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